Pitch Reflection

If I was going to do my Pitch again I would include a more Description on what I was saying. For example I did not actually refer to the Good Win theory or Mention his name in the presentation itself. I did include technical terms but it came to a point where not enough technical terms where used for the presentation to be fluent and engaging.  Also for the presentation itself I could have used more reference's to the Narrative side of Music Videos; Meaning I could have used videos that related to my ideas so I could show the audience a feel of what my music video would look like.

The strengths I had was that I was not often looking at the presentation on the board and I had eye contact with people around the room. The overall response to the Music Video pitch was good because I was not making the typical rap video with cliched conventions such as Voyeurism,  Gold Chains, Expensive Cars, Women, expensive clothing ect, I went with a concept of a guy becoming a rapper who is in a relationship. The twist here was that the relationship was not going really well due to the guy not looking out for his girlfriend. Also I wanted to subvert the genre by using Narrative because most rap videos do not have narrative. The actual music video will actually be based on the girl's point of view because she is the one that is going through the hard times. The music video pretty much has two story's one from the rapper's POV & the other from the girlfriend's POV.

The improvements that the audience gave me was that I could work on the location abit. In my presentation I mentioned that parts would be set in london but the audience responded with why a rapper would be in London. I could not come up with an answer but I did this because London is a place that is major and it has luxurious parts just the same as New York. 

To improve on my music video I would implement what the audience said by using places that are actually suitable for the cast to go to. For example I could use ally ways to express the Girl's feelings and use High Angle shots to show that the girl is looked down upon ect. All these mini changes can lead to a good music video if it is well planned and expressed.